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hey~ h s going?
if you can speak english better than I can...would you check my grammar for me?
plz...actually I`m studying english in America...
and I`ve been here just for 2 months...
so probably... no definitely I could make some mistakes...just like you could make mistake on some other things....
and I can`t leave message in korean..cuz..my computer is a peice of junk...if I gave you hard time to translate my message..so sorry about that....
and don`t look around this board to point out some other people`s faults plz.....
that could be hurt to some other people...you got that?
you stupid dumb ass...
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: : I think pornography is not just for men....and you talked about main characters are always women...
: : but there are many famous pornography actors either....
: : and many women watchers vote for some hot actors...
: : I`m just wondering that why do you think that is just for men...
: : of cource It depends on circumstance,and of course there are many differences between you and me, but anyhow...
: : many people around me include girls they enjoy pornography.... I just wanna know why you think like that..
: : would you give me answer?
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